text changes suggested by the doc team

edx_proctoring/static/proctoring/js/views/proctored_exam_allowance_view.js

@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ var edx = edx || {};
             this.course_id = this.$el.data('course-id');
 
             /* this should be moved to a 'data' attribute in HTML */
-            this.tempate_url = '/static/proctoring/templates/course_allowances.underscore';
+            this.template_url = '/static/proctoring/templates/course_allowances.underscore';
             this.template = null;
             this.initial_url = this.collection.url;
             this.allowance_url = this.initial_url + 'allowance';
@@ -94,7 +94,7 @@ var edx = edx || {};
         },
         loadTemplateData: function () {
             var self = this;
-            $.ajax({url: self.tempate_url, dataType: "html"})
+            $.ajax({url: self.template_url, dataType: "html"})
                 .error(function (jqXHR, textStatus, errorThrown) {
 
                 })

edx_proctoring/static/proctoring/templates/course_allowances.underscore

@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@
                <th class="exam-name"><%- gettext("Exam Name") %></th>
                <th class="username"><%- gettext("Username") %></th>
                <th class="email"><%- gettext("Email") %></th>
-               <th class="allowance-name"><%- gettext("Allowance Name") %> </th>
+               <th class="allowance-name"><%- gettext("Allowance Type") %> </th>
                <th class="allowance-value"><%- gettext("Allowance Value") %></th>
                <th class="c_action"><%- gettext("Actions") %> </th>
             </tr>

edx_proctoring/templates/proctoring/proctoring_launch_callback.html

@@ -161,13 +161,22 @@
 
     <div class="steps-container">
       <div class="body-container">
-        <h3>{% blocktrans %} Your Proctoring Session Is Ready {% endblocktrans %}</h3>
-        <p>{% blocktrans %} Your proctoring session has started. From this point in time, you must adhere to the online proctoring rules to pass the proctoring review for your exam. Return to the courseware window now and start your exam. {% endblocktrans %}</p>
+        <h3>{% blocktrans %} Your Proctoring Session Has Started {% endblocktrans %}</h3>
+        <p>{% blocktrans %} From this point in time, you must follow the <a href="http://edx.readthedocs.org/projects/edx-guide-for-students/en/latest/sfd_proctoredexams/SFD_OnlineProctoringPolicy.html">online proctoring rules</a> to pass the proctoring review for your exam. {% endblocktrans %}</p>
 
         <div class="alert">
-          {% blocktrans %} Do not close this window. Leave it open in the background as you take your exam. {% endblocktrans %}
+          {% blocktrans %}
+            If you close this window before you finish your exam, your proctoring session ends,
+            and you might fail the proctoring review for your exam.
+          {% endblocktrans %}
         </div>
-        <h5> {% blocktrans %} Remember to abide by the guidelines and rules of your proctored exam, including: {% endblocktrans %}</h5>
+        <h5>
+          {% blocktrans %}
+            Return to the edX course window to start your exam. When you have finished your exam and
+            have marked it as complete, you can close this window to end the proctoring session
+            and upload your proctoring session data for review."
+          {% endblocktrans %}
+        </h5>
         <p>
           {% blocktrans %}
             Lorem ipsum dolor sit amet, consectetuer adipiscing elit. Aenean commodo ligula eget dolor.

edx_proctoring/templates/proctoring/seq_proctored_exam_entrance.html

@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 <div class="sequence proctored-exam entrance" data-exam-id="{{exam_id}}">
   <h3>
     {% blocktrans %}
-      Would you like to take {{ display_name }} as a proctored exam?
+      Would you like to take "{{ display_name }}" as a proctored exam?
     {% endblocktrans %}
   </h3>
   <p>
@@ -18,12 +18,10 @@
     </a>
     <p>
       {% blocktrans %}
-        You will be guided through installing {{platform_name}} approved online proctoring software and
-        performing various checks to set up your proctored exam session. Have your photo ID
-        ready for the photo ID verification step.<br />
-        Immediately after you complete the set up, you will begin your timed and proctored exam.<br />
-        Before you set up your proctoring session, you might want to <a href="#">read this</a>
-        to learn more about taking a proctored exam.<br />
+        You will be guided through steps to set up online proctoring software and to perform various checks.</br>
+          &#8226; Have your photo ID ready so that you can verify your identity. </br>
+          &#8226; Be ready to start your exam after you complete the proctoring setup. </br>
+
       {% endblocktrans %}
     </p>
 
@@ -36,9 +34,8 @@
     </a>
     <p>
       {% blocktrans %}
-        By not taking the exam as a proctored exam, you will not earn credit for completing
-        the exam or this course. You are taking this exam as an open exam and can begin when
-        you are ready.
+        If you take this exam without proctoring, you will not be eligible to use this course for academic credit,
+        even if you achieve a passing grade.
       {% endblocktrans %}
     </p>
       <i class="fa fa-arrow-circle-right start-timed-exam" data-ajax-url="{{enter_exam_endpoint}}" data-exam-id="{{exam_id}}" data-attempt-proctored=false data-start-immediately=true></i>
@@ -56,9 +53,8 @@
 
       if (!attempt_proctored) {
         var msg = gettext(
-          "Are you sure you want to take this exam without proctoring? " +
-          "This will make you no longer eligible to earn credit for this course."
-        )
+          "You will no longer be eligible to use this course for academic credit."
+        );
         if (!confirm(msg)) {
           return;
         }

edx_proctoring/templates/proctoring/seq_proctored_exam_error.html

@@ -2,55 +2,35 @@
 <div class="failure sequence proctored-exam" data-exam-id="{{exam_id}}">
   <h3>
     {% blocktrans %}
-      Your proctoring session is in error
+      There was a problem with your proctoring session
     {% endblocktrans %}
   </h3>
 
   <h4>
     {% blocktrans %}
-      Your Proctoring Session review: <b class="failure"> Failed </b>
+      Your proctoring session results: <b class="failure"> Unsatisfactory </b>
     {% endblocktrans %}
   </h4>
 
   <p>
     {% blocktrans %}
-      It appears that your proctoring session has been shut down while you were taking this
-      exam. This invalidates your proctored exam and you will not be eligible for course
-      credit.
+      Your proctoring session ended before you completed this exam, so your proctoring results are incomplete.
+      You will not be eligible to use this course for academic credit, even if you achieve a passing grade.
     {% endblocktrans %}
   </p>
   <hr>
   <p>
     {% blocktrans %}
-      Please see <a href="{{progress_page_url}}">your progress in this course </a>
-      for your general course credit worthiness.
+      View your credit eligibility status on your <a href="{{progress_page_url}}">Progress</a> page.
     {% endblocktrans %}
   </p>
 </div>
 <div class="footer-sequence border-b-0 padding-b-0">
-  <span> {% trans "Can I contest this review?" %} </span>
-  <p class="proctored-exam-option">
-    {% blocktrans %}
-        Lorem ipsum dolor sit amet, consectetuer adipiscing elit. Aenean commodo ligula eget dolor.
-        Aenean massa.
-    {% endblocktrans %}
-  </p>
-  <a href="#" class="contest-review">Contest this review</a>
-  <hr class="clearfix">
-  <span> {% trans "Is there anything I can do to make up/replace this session?" %} </span>
-  <p class="proctored-exam-option">
-    {% blocktrans %}
-        Lorem ipsum dolor sit amet, consectetuer adipiscing elit. Aenean commodo ligula eget dolor.
-        Aenean massa.
-    {% endblocktrans %}
-  </p>
-  <hr class="clearfix">
-  <span> {% trans "See Also" %} </span>
   <p>
     {% blocktrans %}
-      <a class="footer-link" href="#">
-        Frequently asked questions about proctoring and earning college credit.
-      </a>
+      If you have concerns about your proctoring session results, contact your course team.
     {% endblocktrans %}
   </p>
+  <div class="clearfix"></div>
 </div>
+{% include 'proctoring/seq_proctored_exam_footer.html' %}

edx_proctoring/templates/proctoring/seq_proctored_exam_footer.html

@@ -3,10 +3,13 @@
   <h4> {% trans "See Also" %} </h4>
     <p>
     {% blocktrans %}
-      <a class="footer-link" href="#">
+      <a class="footer-link" href="http://edx.readthedocs.org/projects/edx-guide-for-students/en/latest/sfd_proctoredexams/SFD_ProctoredExams.html">
         Frequently asked questions about proctoring and earning college credit.
       </a>
-      <a class="footer-link" href="#">
+      <a class="footer-link" href="http://edx.readthedocs.org/projects/edx-guide-for-students/en/latest/sfd_proctoredexams/SFD_OnlineProctoringPolicy.html">
+        Online proctoring rules
+      </a>
+      <a class="footer-link" href="http://clientportal.softwaresecure.com/support/index.php?/Knowledgebase/Article/View/252/0/system-requirements-remote-proctor-now">
         Technical Requirements for taking a proctored exam
       </a>
     {% endblocktrans %}

edx_proctoring/templates/proctoring/seq_proctored_exam_instructions.html

@@ -57,12 +57,12 @@
 
       var action_url = $(this).data('change-state-url');
       var exam_id = $(this).data('exam-id');
-      var action = $(this).data('action')
+      var action = $(this).data('action');
 
       var msg = gettext(
         "Are you sure you want to take this exam without proctoring? " +
-        "This will make you no longer eligible to earn credit for this course."
-      )
+        "You will no longer be eligible to use this course for academic credit."
+      );
       if (!confirm(msg)) {
         return;
       }
@@ -76,7 +76,7 @@
         },
         success: function() {
           // Reloading page will reflect the new state of the attempt
-          location.reload()
+          location.reload();
         }
       });
     }
@@ -132,7 +132,7 @@
   });
 
   function poll_exam_started() {
-    var url = $('.instructions').data('exam-started-poll-url')
+    var url = $('.instructions').data('exam-started-poll-url');
     $.ajax(url).success(function(data){
       if (data.status === 'ready_to_start') {
         if (_waiting_for_proctored_interval != null) {

edx_proctoring/templates/proctoring/seq_proctored_exam_ready_to_start.html

@@ -7,13 +7,13 @@
   </h3>
   <p>
     {% blocktrans %}
-      Placeholder content. <strong>Please keep the proctoring software open and running while you complete your exam</strong>.
+      Do not close the proctoring session window until you have completed and submitted your exam.
     {% endblocktrans %}
   </p>
   <div class="proctored-exam-message">
     <h3>
     {% blocktrans %}
-      You May Begin Your Exam Now
+      You Can Begin Your Exam Now
     {% endblocktrans %}
     </h3>
     <p>
@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@
     <div>
       <button type="button" class="proctored-enter-exam" data-action="start" data-exam-id="{{exam_id}}" data-change-state-url="{{change_state_url}}">
         {% blocktrans %}
-          I'm ready! Start my timed proctored exam
+          I'm ready! Start my exam
         {% endblocktrans %}
       </button>
     </div>
@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@
 
       var action_url = $(this).data('change-state-url');
       var exam_id = $(this).data('exam-id');
-      var action = $(this).data('action')
+      var action = $(this).data('action');
 
       // Update the state of the attempt
       $.ajax({
@@ -54,7 +54,7 @@
         },
         success: function() {
           // Reloading page will reflect the new state of the attempt
-          location.reload()
+          location.reload();
         }
       });
     }

edx_proctoring/templates/proctoring/seq_proctored_exam_ready_to_submit.html

@@ -2,19 +2,20 @@
 <div class="sequence proctored-exam completed" data-exam-id="{{exam_id}}">
   <h3>
     {% blocktrans %}
-      This is the end of your proctored exam
+      Are you sure you want to end your proctored exam?
     {% endblocktrans %}
   </h3>
   <p>
     {% blocktrans %}
-      Make sure your responses and work are ready to be submitted. Once they are, you may end the exam below.
-      Your worked will then be graded and your proctored session will be reviewed separately.
+      After you submit your exam, your responses are graded and your proctoring session is reviewed.
+      You might be eligible to earn academic credit for this course if you complete all required exams
+      as well as achieve a final grade that meets credit requirements for the course.
     {% endblocktrans %}
   </p>
   <div>
     <button type="button" name="submit-proctored-exam" class="exam-action-button" data-action="submit" data-exam-id="{{exam_id}}" data-change-state-url="{{change_state_url}}">
       {% blocktrans %}
-        I'm ready! Submit my answers and end my proctored exam.
+        Yes, end my proctored exam
       {% endblocktrans %}
     </button>
   </div>
@@ -22,22 +23,12 @@
     <div>
       <button type="button" name="goback-proctored-exam" class="exam-action-button" data-action="start" data-exam-id="{{exam_id}}" data-change-state-url="{{change_state_url}}">
         {% blocktrans %}
-          No, I am not ready! I'd like to continue my work.
+          No, I'd like to continue working
         {% endblocktrans %}
       </button>
     </div>
   {% endif %}
 </div>
-<div class="footer-sequence border-b-0 padding-b-0">
-  <span> {% trans "What happens next ?" %} </span>
-    <p>
-    {% blocktrans %}
-        Lorem ipsum dolor sit amet, consectetuer adipiscing elit. Aenean commodo ligula eget dolor.
-        Aenean massa. Cum sociis natoque penatibus et magnis dis parturient montes, nascetur ridiculus mus.
-        Donec quam felis, ultricies nec, pellentesque eu, pretium quis, sem. Nulla consequat massa quis enim.
-    {% endblocktrans %}
-  </p>
-</div>
 <script type="text/javascript">
   $('.exam-action-button').click(
     function(event) {

edx_proctoring/templates/proctoring/seq_proctored_exam_rejected.html

@@ -8,48 +8,29 @@
 
   <h4>
     {% blocktrans %}
-      Your Proctoring Session review: <b class="failure"> Failed </b>
+      Your proctoring session results: <b class="failure"> Unsatisfactory </b>
     {% endblocktrans %}
   </h4>
 
   <p>
     {% blocktrans %}
-      Your session was reviewed by one of our proctors and some activities noted violate the
-      <a href="#">requirements and guidelines</a> needed for a successful review,
+      You are not eligible to purchase academic credit for this course, regardless of your final grade in the course.
+      If you have concerns about your proctoring session results, contact your course team.
     {% endblocktrans %}
   </p>
   <hr>
   <p>
     {% blocktrans %}
-      Please see <a href="{{progress_page_url}}">your progress in this course </a>
-      for your general course credit worthiness.
+      View your credit eligibility status on your <a href="{{progress_page_url}}">Progress</a> page.
     {% endblocktrans %}
   </p>
 </div>
 <div class="footer-sequence border-b-0 padding-b-0">
-  <span> {% trans "Can I contest this review?" %} </span>
-  <p class="proctored-exam-option">
-    {% blocktrans %}
-        Lorem ipsum dolor sit amet, consectetuer adipiscing elit. Aenean commodo ligula eget dolor.
-        Aenean massa.
-    {% endblocktrans %}
-  </p>
-  <a href="#" class="contest-review">Contest this review</a>
-  <hr class="clearfix">
-  <span> {% trans "Is there anything I can do to make up/replace this session?" %} </span>
-  <p class="proctored-exam-option">
-    {% blocktrans %}
-        Lorem ipsum dolor sit amet, consectetuer adipiscing elit. Aenean commodo ligula eget dolor.
-        Aenean massa.
-    {% endblocktrans %}
-  </p>
-  <hr class="clearfix">
-  <span> {% trans "See Also" %} </span>
   <p>
     {% blocktrans %}
-      <a class="footer-link" href="#">
-        Frequently asked questions about proctoring and earning college credit.
-      </a>
+      If you have concerns about your proctoring session results, contact your course team.
     {% endblocktrans %}
   </p>
+  <div class="clearfix"></div>
 </div>
+{% include 'proctoring/seq_proctored_exam_footer.html' %}

edx_proctoring/templates/proctoring/seq_proctored_exam_submitted.html

@@ -8,21 +8,21 @@
 
   <h4>
     {% blocktrans %}
-      Your Proctoring Session review: <b> Pending </b>
+      Your proctoring session results: <b> Pending </b>
     {% endblocktrans %}
   </h4>
 
   <p>
     {% blocktrans %}
-      In general sessions are reviewed in 24-48 hours of submission. If you have questions about
-      the status of this review after that timeframe, <a href="#">contact {{platform_name}} support</a>
+      Proctoring session results are usually available 24-48 hours after you submit your exam.
+      If you have questions about the status of your session review
+      after that time, contact <a href="https://www.edx.org/contact-us">edX</a> Support.
     {% endblocktrans %}
   </p>
   <hr>
   <p>
     {% blocktrans %}
-      Please see <a href="{{progress_page_url}}">your progress in this course </a>
-      for your general course credit worthiness.
+      View your credit eligibility status on your <a href="{{progress_page_url}}">Progress</a> page.
     {% endblocktrans %}
   </p>
 </div>

edx_proctoring/templates/proctoring/seq_proctored_exam_verified.html

@@ -8,21 +8,21 @@
 
   <h4>
     {% blocktrans %}
-      Your Proctoring Session review: <b class="success"> Passed </b>
+      Your proctoring session results: <b class="success"> Satisfactory </b>
     {% endblocktrans %}
   </h4>
 
   <p>
     {% blocktrans %}
-      This satisfies the requirement that you complete this exam in a proctored format and contributes
-      to your credit earning work for this course.
+      You have completed a proctored exam with a <strong>Satisfactory</strong> proctoring session result.
+      You are eligible to purchase academic credit for this course if you complete all required exams
+      and also achieve a final grade that meets the credit requirements for the course.
     {% endblocktrans %}
   </p>
   <hr>
   <p>
     {% blocktrans %}
-      Please see <a href="{{progress_page_url}}">your progress in this course </a>
-      for your general course credit worthiness.
+      View your credit eligibility status on your <a href="{{progress_page_url}}">Progress</a> page.
     {% endblocktrans %}
   </p>
 </div>

edx_proctoring/templates/proctoring/seq_proctored_practice_exam_entrance.html

@@ -2,24 +2,12 @@
 <div class="sequence proctored-exam entrance" data-exam-id="{{exam_id}}">
   <h3>
     {% blocktrans %}
-      Would you like to take {{ display_name }} as a practice proctored exam?
+      Would you like to take "{{ display_name }}" as a practice proctored exam?
     {% endblocktrans %}
   </h3>
   <p>
     {% blocktrans %}
-      Since this course is offered for credit, there will be one or more proctored exams in this course. Before you encounter a proctored exam that will count towards your grade and credit eligibility. You now have the option to take a practice proctored exam. Online proctoring is one requirement towards being eligible for credit.
-    {% endblocktrans %}
-  </p>
-  <p>
-    {% blocktrans %}
-      This practice proctored exam is being provided to you so that you can learn more about proctoring. Also this
-      practice exam will give you a chance to test your computer system with the proctoring software without it
-      counting towards your grade.
-    {% endblocktrans %}
-  </p>
-  <p>
-    {% blocktrans %}
-        While it is not requireed to take this practice proctored exam, it is highly recommended.
+      You can try this practice exam as many times as you want.
     {% endblocktrans %}
   </p>
   <div class="gated-sequence">
@@ -29,12 +17,8 @@
     </a>
     <p>
       {% blocktrans %}
-        You will be guided through installing {{platform_name}} approved online proctoring software and
-        performing various checks to set up your proctored exam session. Have your photo ID
-        ready for the photo ID verification step.<br />
-        Immediately after you complete the set up, you will begin your timed and proctored exam.<br />
-        Before you set up your proctoring session, you might want to <a href="#">read this</a>
-        to learn more about taking a proctored exam.<br />
+        You will be guided through steps to set up online proctoring software and to perform various check.
+        When you start the exam, the timer on the right shows the time remaining in the exam.
       {% endblocktrans %}
     </p>
 

edx_proctoring/templates/proctoring/seq_proctored_practice_exam_error.html

@@ -2,29 +2,27 @@
 <div class="failure sequence proctored-exam" data-exam-id="{{exam_id}}">
   <h3>
     {% blocktrans %}
-      Your proctoring proctoring session is in error
+      There was a problem with your practice proctoring session
     {% endblocktrans %}
   </h3>
 
   <h4>
     {% blocktrans %}
-      Your Practice Proctoring Session: <b class="failure"> Failed </b>
+      Your practice proctoring results: <b class="failure"> Unsatisfactory </b>
     {% endblocktrans %}
   </h4>
 
   <p>
     {% blocktrans %}
-      It appears that your proctoring session has been shut down while you were taking this
-      practice exam. Your practice exam is considered in error. While this will not affect your grade
-      or credit eligibility, it is recommended that you retry this practice exam until your
-      are successful
+      Your proctoring session ended before you completed this practice exam.
+      You can retry this practice exam if you had problems setting up the online proctoring software.
     {% endblocktrans %}
   </p>
   <hr>
   <div class="gated-sequence">
     <span><i class="fa fa-lock"></i></span>
     <a class="start-timed-exam" data-ajax-url="{{enter_exam_endpoint}}" data-exam-id="{{exam_id}}" data-attempt-proctored=true data-start-immediately=false>
-      {% trans "Please retry this practice exam again" %}
+      {% trans "Try this practice exam again" %}
     </a>
   </div>
 </div>

edx_proctoring/templates/proctoring/seq_proctored_practice_exam_submitted.html

@@ -8,15 +8,14 @@
 
   <h4>
     {% blocktrans %}
-      Your Practice Proctoring Session: <b> Completed </b>
+      Your practice proctoring session: <b> Completed </b>
     {% endblocktrans %}
   </h4>
 
   <p>
     {% blocktrans %}
-      As practice exams do not count towards a grade or credit eligibility
-      they are not reviewed. You have completed your practice exam and should continue
-      with the rest of your course
+      Practice exams do not affect your grade or your credit eligibility.
+      You have completed this practice exam and can continue with your course.
     {% endblocktrans %}
   </p>
   <div class="gated-sequence">

edx_proctoring/templates/proctoring/seq_timed_exam_expired.html

@@ -21,12 +21,4 @@
     </p>
   </div>
 </div>
-<div class="footer-sequence border-b-0 padding-b-0">
-  <span> {% trans "Is there anything i can do to make up/replace this session ?" %} </span>
-    <p>
-    {% blocktrans %}
-      text goes here.
-    {% endblocktrans %}
-  </p>
-</div>
 {% include 'proctoring/seq_timed_exam_footer.html' %}

edx_proctoring/templates/proctoring/seq_timed_exam_footer.html

@@ -3,11 +3,8 @@
   <h4> {% trans "Can I request additional time to complete my exam? " %} </h4>
     <p>{% blocktrans %}
       If you have disabilities or are taking the exam in difficult conditions,
-      you might be eligible for additional time allowance on timed exams.
+      you might be eligible for an additional time allowance on timed exams.
       Ask your instructor or course staff for information about additional time allowances.
-      Please see <a href="#">
-        our frequently asked questions about timed exams and more policies.
-      </a>
     {% endblocktrans %}
   </p>
 </div>