Timed Exams Student-Facing Labels

edx_proctoring/templates/timed_exam/entrance.html

@@ -8,14 +8,18 @@
   <p>
     {% trans "This exam has a time limit associated with it." %}
     <strong>
-      {% trans "To pass this exam you must complete the problems in the time allowed." %}
+      {% trans "To pass this exam, you must complete the problems in the time allowed." %}
     </strong>
-    {% trans "As soon as you indicate that you are ready to start the exam, you will have "%} {{total_time|lower}} {% trans " to complete the exam." %}
+    {% trans "After you select " %}
+    <strong>
+      {% trans "I am ready to start this timed exam" %}
+    </strong>
+    {% trans ", you will have "%} {{total_time|lower}} {% trans " to complete and submit the exam." %}
   </p>
   <button class="gated-sequence start-timed-exam" data-ajax-url="{{enter_exam_endpoint}}" data-exam-id="{{exam_id}}">
     <a>
       {% blocktrans %}
-        I'm ready! Start this timed exam.
+        I am ready to start this timed exam.
       {% endblocktrans %}
       <i class="fa fa-arrow-circle-right"></i>
     </a>
@@ -60,8 +64,8 @@
           var msg = gettext(
             "There has been a problem starting your exam.\n\n" +
             "Possible reasons are that your account has not been fully activated,\n" +
-            "you have are experiencing a network connection problem, or there has been\n" +
-            "a service disruption. Please check these and try again."
+            "you are experiencing a network connection problem, or there has been\n" +
+            "a service disruption. Please check these potential problems and try again."
           );
           alert(msg);
         });

edx_proctoring/templates/timed_exam/footer.html

 {% load i18n %}
 <div class="footer-sequence">
-  <h4> {% trans "Can I request additional time to complete my exam? " %} </h4>
+  <h4> {% trans "Can I request additional time to complete my exam?" %} </h4>
     <p>{% blocktrans %}
       If you have disabilities or are taking the exam in difficult conditions,
       you might be eligible for an additional time allowance on timed exams.
-      Ask your instructor or course staff for information about additional time allowances.
+      Ask your course team for information about additional time allowances.
     {% endblocktrans %}
   </p>
 </div>

edx_proctoring/templates/timed_exam/ready_to_submit.html

@@ -2,24 +2,23 @@
 <div class="sequence timed-exam completed" data-exam-id="{{exam_id}}">
   <h3>
     {% blocktrans %}
-      Are you sure you want to end your timed exam?
+      Are you sure that you want to submit your timed exam?
     {% endblocktrans %}
   </h3>
   <p>
     {% blocktrans %}
-      Make sure your responses and work are ready to be submitted. Once they are, you may end the exam below
-      and your worked will then be graded.
+      Make sure your answers are ready to be submitted, and then submit your exam. Your exam will then be graded.
     {% endblocktrans %}
   </p>
   <button type="button" name="submit-proctored-exam" class="exam-action-button btn btn-primary btn-base" data-action="submit" data-exam-id="{{exam_id}}" data-change-state-url="{{change_state_url}}">
     {% blocktrans %}
-      Yes, end my timed exam
+      Yes, submit my timed exam.
     {% endblocktrans %}
   </button>
   {% if does_time_remain %}
     <button type="button" name="goback-proctored-exam" class="exam-action-button btn btn-secondary btn-base" data-action="start" data-exam-id="{{exam_id}}" data-change-state-url="{{change_state_url}}">
       {% blocktrans %}
-        No, I'd like to continue working
+        No, I want to continue working.
       {% endblocktrans %}
     </button>
   {% endif %}

edx_proctoring/templates/timed_exam/submitted.html

@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 <div class="sequence proctored-exam completed" data-exam-id="{{exam_id}}">
   <h3>
     {% blocktrans %}
-      You have submitted your timed exam
+      You have submitted your timed exam.
     {% endblocktrans %}
   </h3>
 
@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@
   <hr>
   <p>
     {% blocktrans %}
-      As you have submitted your exam, you will not be able to re-enter it. Your grades for this timed exam will be immediately available on the <a href="{{progress_page_url}}">Progress</a> page.
+      Because you have submitted your exam, you can no longer access the exam. Check your <a href="{{progress_page_url}}">Progress</a> page for your grade for this timed exam.
     {% endblocktrans %}
   </p>
 </div>

edx_proctoring/tests/test_api.py

@@ -1345,7 +1345,7 @@ class ProctoredExamApiTests(LoggedInTestCase):
     @ddt.data(
         (
             ProctoredExamStudentAttemptStatus.ready_to_submit,
-            'Are you sure you want to end your timed exam?'
+            'Are you sure that you want to submit your timed exam?'
         ),
         (
             ProctoredExamStudentAttemptStatus.submitted,