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edx_proctoring/static/proctoring/templates/student-proctored-exam-attempts.underscore

@@ -86,7 +86,7 @@
                         <th class="attempt-started-at"><%- gettext("Started At") %></th>
                         <th class="attempt-completed-at"><%- gettext("Completed At") %> </th>
                         <th class="attempt-status"><%- gettext("Status") %> </th>
-                        <th class="c_action"><%- gettext("Action") %> </th>
+                        <th class="c_action"><%- gettext("Actions") %> </th>
                     </tr>
                 </thead>
                 <tbody>

edx_proctoring/templates/proctoring/seq_proctored_exam_entrance.html

@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 <div class="sequence proctored-exam entrance" data-exam-id="{{exam_id}}">
   <h3>
     {% blocktrans %}
-      Would you like to take {{ display_name }} as a Proctored Exam?
+      Would you like to take {{ display_name }} as a proctored exam?
     {% endblocktrans %}
   </h3>
   <p>
@@ -14,38 +14,36 @@
   <div class="gated-sequence">
     <span><i class="fa fa-lock"></i></span>
     <a class="start-timed-exam" data-ajax-url="{{enter_exam_endpoint}}" data-exam-id="{{exam_id}}" data-attempt-proctored=true data-start-immediately=false>
-      {% trans "Yes, take this as a proctored exam (and be eligible for credit)" %}
+      {% trans "Yes, I want to take this exam with online proctoring (and be eligible for credit)" %}
     </a>
     <p>
       {% blocktrans %}
-        You will need to <strong>download and install {{platform_name}} approved software </strong>for the online proctoring of
-        your exam. After successful installation, you will be <strong>guided through setting up your
-        proctored session and begin the exam immediately </strong>afterwards.</p>
+        You will be guided through installing edX-approved online proctoring software and
+        performing various checks to set up your proctored exam session. Have your photo ID
+        ready for the photo ID verification step.<br />
+        Immediately after you complete the set up, you will begin your timed and proctored exam.<br />
+        Before you set up your proctoring session, you might want to <a href="#">read this</a>
+        to learn more about taking a proctored exam.<br />
       {% endblocktrans %}
+    </p>
+
     <i class="fa fa-arrow-circle-right start-timed-exam" data-ajax-url="{{enter_exam_endpoint}}" data-exam-id="{{exam_id}}" data-attempt-proctored=true data-start-immediately=false></i>
   </div>
   <div class="gated-sequence">
     <span><i class="fa fa-unlock"></i></span>
     <a class="start-timed-exam" data-ajax-url="{{enter_exam_endpoint}}" data-exam-id="{{exam_id}}" data-attempt-proctored=false data-start-immediately=true>
-      {% trans "No, take this as an open exam (and not be eligible for credit)" %}
+      {% trans "No, I want to take this exam without proctoring (and not be eligible for credit)" %}
     </a>
     <p>
       {% blocktrans %}
-        You may proceed and begin the exam at your leisure, but <strong>you will not be able to apply for
-        college credit </strong>upon completing the exam or this course in general.
+        By not taking the exam as a proctored exam, you will not earn credit for completing
+        the exam or this course. You are taking this exam as an open exam and can begin when
+        you are ready.
       {% endblocktrans %}
     </p>
       <i class="fa fa-arrow-circle-right start-timed-exam" data-ajax-url="{{enter_exam_endpoint}}" data-exam-id="{{exam_id}}" data-attempt-proctored=false data-start-immediately=true></i>
   </div>
 </div>
-<div class="footer-sequence">
-  <h4> {% trans "Why i am seeing these options?" %} </h4>
-    <p>
-    {% blocktrans %}
-      Text to be added here.
-    {% endblocktrans %}
-  </p>
-</div>
 {% include 'proctoring/seq_proctored_exam_footer.html' %}
 
 <script type="text/javascript">

edx_proctoring/templates/proctoring/seq_proctored_exam_instructions.html

@@ -2,39 +2,41 @@
 <div class="sequence proctored-exam instructions" data-exam-id="{{exam_id}}" data-exam-started-poll-url="{{exam_started_poll_url}}">
   <h3>
     {% blocktrans %}
-      Awaiting Proctoring Installation & Set Up
+      Awaiting Proctoring Software Installation and Setup
     {% endblocktrans %}
   </h3>
   <p>
     {% blocktrans %}
-      You've chosen to take {{display_name}} as a proctored exam. You should be directed to a new window
+      You have chosen to take {{display_name}} as a proctored exam. You should be directed to a new window
       with installation and setup instructions. You can also <a href="{{software_download_url}}" target="_blank">open the installation window directly.</a>
     {% endblocktrans %}
   </p>
   <div class="proctored-exam-message">
     <h3>
     {% blocktrans %}
-      Here is your unique exam code. You'll be asked for it during the setup.
+      Here is your unique exam code. You will be asked for it during the setup.
     {% endblocktrans %}
     </h3>
     <h2> {{exam_code}}<span class='copy-to-clipboard'></span></h2>
     <p>
       {% blocktrans %}
-        Please do not share this code. It can only be used once and it tied to your {{platform_name}} account.
+        Do not share this code. It is linked to your {{platform_name}} account and can be used only once.
       {% endblocktrans %}
     </p>
   </div>
 </div>
 <div class="footer-sequence border-b-0 padding-b-0">
-  <span> {% trans "Note: Once you complete installation and set up, your timed exam will begin." %} </span>
+  <span> {% trans "Note: As soon as you finish installing and setting up the proctoring software,
+    you will be prompted to start your timed exam." %} </span>
     <p>
     {% blocktrans %}
-      Please be prepared to start the exam and follow all of the guidelines of an {{platform_name}} proctored exam.
+      Be prepared to start your exam and to complete it while adhering to the {{platform_name}}
+      rules for online proctoring.
     {% endblocktrans %}
   </p>
   <p class="proctored-exam-option">
     {% blocktrans %}
-      Don't want to take this as a proctored exam? <a href="#">Take this as an open exam instead.</a>
+      Don't want to take this exam with online proctoring? <a href="#">Take this exam as an open exam instead.</a>
     {% endblocktrans %}
   </p>
 </div>

edx_proctoring/tests/test_api.py

@@ -72,10 +72,10 @@ class ProctoredExamApiTests(LoggedInTestCase):
         self.disabled_exam_id = self._create_disabled_exam()
 
         # Messages for get_student_view
-        self.start_an_exam_msg = 'Would you like to take %s as a Proctored Exam?'
+        self.start_an_exam_msg = 'Would you like to take %s as a proctored exam?'
         self.timed_exam_msg = '%s is a Timed Exam'
-        self.exam_time_expired_msg = 'you did not submit your exam before the time allotted expired'
-        self.chose_proctored_exam_msg = 'You\'ve chosen to take %s as a proctored exam'
+        self.exam_time_expired_msg = 'You did not complete the exam in the allotted time'
+        self.chose_proctored_exam_msg = 'You have chosen to take %s as a proctored exam'
 
     def _create_proctored_exam(self):
         """