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cms/templates/checklists.html

@@ -32,17 +32,13 @@
   <header class="mast has-actions has-subtitle">
     <div class="title">
       <span class="title-sub">Tools</span>
-      <h1 class="title-1">Course Tasks &amp; Checklists</h1>
+      <h1 class="title-1">Course Checklists</h1>
     </div>
   </header>
 </div>
 
 <div class="wrapper-content wrapper">
   <section class="content">
-    <div class="introduction">
-      <p class="copy">Praesent commodo cursus magna, vel scelerisque nisl consectetur et. Duis mollis, est non commodo luctus, nisi erat porttitor ligula, eget lacinia odio sem nec elit. Vivamus sagittis lacus vel augue laoreet rutrum faucibus dolor auctor.</p>
-    </div>
-
     <article class="content-primary" role="main">
       <form id="course-checklists" class="course-checklists" method="post" action="">
         <h2 class="title title-3 sr">Current Checklists</h2>
@@ -51,12 +47,17 @@
 
     <aside class="content-supplementary" role="complimentary">
       <div class="bit">
-        <h3 class="title title-3">What are Checklists?</h3>
-        <p>Lorem ipsum dolor sit amet, consectetuer adipiscing elit. Aenean commodo ligula eget dolor. Aenean massa. Cum sociis natoque penatibus et magnis dis parturient montes, nascetur ridiculus mus. Donec quam felis, ultricies nec, pellentesque eu, pretium quis, sem. Nulla consequat massa quis enim. Donec pede justo, fringilla vel, aliquet nec, vulputate eget, arcu. In enim justo, rhoncus ut, imperdiet a, venenatis vitae, justo. Nullam dictum felis eu pede mollis pretium.</p>
+        <h3 class="title title-3">What are checklists?</h3>
+        <p>
+          Running a course on edX is a complex undertaking. Course checklists are designed to help you understand and keep track of all the steps necessary to get your course ready for students.
+        </p>
+        <p>
+          These checklists are shared among your course team, and any changes you make are immediately visible to other members of the team and saved automatically.
+        </p>
       </div>
 
       <div class="bit">
-        <h3 class="title title-3">Studio Checklists</h3>
+        <h3 class="title title-3">Studio checklists</h3>
         <nav class="nav-page checklists-current">
           <ol>
             % for checklist in checklists:

common/lib/xmodule/xmodule/templates/course/empty.yaml

@@ -10,57 +10,57 @@ metadata:
                      "action_url": "/manage_users/",
                      "action_text": "Edit Course Team"},
                     {"short_description": "Set Important Dates for Your Course",
-                     "long_description": "Establish your course's student enrollment and launch dates on the Schedule and Details Settings page.",
+                     "long_description": "Establish your course's student enrollment and launch dates on the Schedule and Details page.",
                      "is_checked": false,
                      "action_url": "/settings-details/",
                      "action_text": "Edit Course Details & Schedule"},
                      {"short_description": "Draft Your Course's Grading Policy",
-                     "long_description": "Regardless of whether you have all your course assignments written, you can immediately get started setting up assignment types and a grade computation scheme.",
+                     "long_description": "Set up your assignment types and grading policy even if you haven't created all your assignments.",
                      "is_checked": false,
                      "action_url": "/settings-grading/",
                      "action_text": "Edit Grading Settings"},
-                     {"short_description": "Explore the other Studio Checklists",
-                     "long_description": "They'll help you learn the other course authoring tools available to you, and will also help you find help when you need it.",
+                     {"short_description": "Explore the Other Studio Checklists",
+                     "long_description": "Discover other available course authoring tools, and find help when you need it.",
                      "is_checked": false,
                      "action_url": "",
                      "action_text": ""}]
         },
         {"short_description" : "Draft a Rough Course Outline",
-         "items" : [{"short_description": "Create your first Section and Subsection",
-                      "long_description": "Walk through the mechanics of building your course's first section and subsection through your course outline to start.",
+         "items" : [{"short_description": "Create Your First Section and Subsection",
+                      "long_description": "Use your course outline to build your first Section and Subsection.",
                       "is_checked": false,
                       "action_url": "/course/",
-                      "action_text": "Edit in Course Outline"},
-                     {"short_description": "Set your first Section's Release Date",
-                      "long_description": "Sections are released sequentially to students, and you have complete control over they are released to students.",
+                      "action_text": "Edit Course Outline"},
+                     {"short_description": "Set Section Release Dates",
+                      "long_description": "Specify the release dates for each Section in your course. Sections become visible to students on their release dates.",
                       "is_checked": false,
                       "action_url": "/course/",
-                      "action_text": "Edit in Course Outline"},
+                      "action_text": "Edit Course Outline"},
                       {"short_description": "Designate a Subsection as Graded",
-                      "long_description": "Assignment types are defined in your grading settings but can be quickly associated with sections using your course outline.",
+                      "long_description": "Set a Subsection to be graded as a specific assignment type. Assignments within graded Subsections count toward a student's final grade.",
                       "is_checked": false,
                       "action_url": "/course/",
-                      "action_text": "Edit in Course Outline"},
+                      "action_text": "Edit Course Outline"},
                       {"short_description": "Reordering Course Content",
-                      "long_description": "From the Course Outline, you can easily reorder your course content based on the progression you'd like students to walk through.",
+                      "long_description": "Use drag and drop to reorder the content in your course.",
                       "is_checked": false,
                       "action_url": "/course/",
-                      "action_text": "Edit in Course Outline"},
-                      {"short_description": "Renaming Course Sections",
-                      "long_description": "Learn how to rename Sections by clicking on its name from the Course Outline; this should open the editing mode.",
+                      "action_text": "Edit Course Outline"},
+                      {"short_description": "Renaming Sections",
+                      "long_description": "Rename Sections by clicking the Section name from the Course Outline.",
                       "is_checked": false,
                       "action_url": "/course/",
-                      "action_text": "Edit in Course Outline"},
+                      "action_text": "Edit Course Outline"},
                       {"short_description": "Deleting Course Content",
-                      "long_description": "Try out deleting on a section, subsection, or unit you don't need anymore. Be careful though, anything inside the course content you delete is also removed.",
+                      "long_description": "Delete Sections, Subsections, or Units you don't need anymore. Be careful, as there is no Undo function.",
                       "is_checked": false,
                       "action_url": "/course/",
-                      "action_text": "Edit in Course Outline"},
+                      "action_text": "Edit Course Outline"},
                       {"short_description": "Add an Instructor-Only Section to Your Outline",
-                      "long_description": "Some course authors find creating a section for unsorted, in-progress work useful. To do this, create a section and set the release date to the distant future.",
+                      "long_description": "Some course authors find using a section for unsorted, in-progress work useful. To do this, create a section and set the release date to the distant future.",
                       "is_checked": false,
                       "action_url": "/course/",
-                      "action_text": "Edit in Course Outline"}]
+                      "action_text": "Edit Course Outline"}]
         },
         {"short_description" : "Explore edX's Support Tools",
          "items" : [{"short_description": "Explore the Studio Help Forum",
@@ -68,35 +68,35 @@ metadata:
                       "is_checked": false,
                       "action_url": "http://help.edge.edx.org/",
                       "action_text": "Visit Studio Help"},
-                     {"short_description": "Enroll in edX101",
-                      "long_description": "Register for edX101, edX's primer for course creation.",
+                     {"short_description": "Enroll in edX 101",
+                      "long_description": "Register for edX 101, edX's primer for course creation.",
                       "is_checked": false,
                       "action_url": "/",
                       "action_text": "Register for edX 101"},
                       {"short_description": "Download the Studio Documentation",
-                      "long_description": "View the searchable Studio documentation to find answers to your questions or information about how to do specific tasks. Once you download the PDF, you can view it offline.",
+                      "long_description": "Download the searchable Studio reference documentation in PDF form.",
                       "is_checked": false,
                       "action_url": "/",
                       "action_text": "Download Documentation"}]
         },
-        {"short_description" : "Draft your Course Introduction",
-         "items" : [{"short_description": "Drafting a Course Description",
-                      "long_description": "Courses on edX each have their own introduction page, including a course video, description, and more. Draft the introduction students will read before deciding to enroll in your course.",
+        {"short_description" : "Draft Your Course About Page",
+         "items" : [{"short_description": "Draft a Course Description",
+                      "long_description": "Courses on edX have an About page that includes a course video, description, and more. Draft the text students will read before deciding to enroll in your course.",
                       "is_checked": false,
                       "action_url": "/settings-details/",
                       "action_text": "Edit Course Details & Schedule"},
-                     {"short_description": "Adding Staff Bios",
-                      "long_description": "Showing prospective students who will be their instructor is helpful, so we recommend including staff bios in the Course introduction page.",
+                     {"short_description": "Add Staff Bios",
+                      "long_description": "Showing prospective students who their instructor will be is helpful. Include staff bios on the course About page.",
                       "is_checked": false,
                       "action_url": "/settings-details/",
                       "action_text": "Edit Course Details & Schedule"},
                       {"short_description": "Add Course FAQs",
-                      "long_description": "Students often have questions about courses, and including a short list of frequently asked questions up front often reduces the number of students who are confused.",
+                      "long_description": "Include a short list of frequently asked questions about your course.",
                       "is_checked": false,
                       "action_url": "/settings-details/",
                       "action_text": "Edit Course Details & Schedule"},
                       {"short_description": "Add Course Prerequisites",
-                      "long_description": "Before a student jumps into a course without the necessary preparation, we'd like them to understand the prerequisites that will make them more likely to succeed.",
+                      "long_description": "Let students know what knowledge and/or skills they should have before they enroll in your course.",
                       "is_checked": false,
                       "action_url": "/settings-details/",
                       "action_text": "Edit Course Details & Schedule"}]